AWSM! but...

WTF? there was like NO planning on this was there? great animation, TERRIBLE story line ( It's sad cause i have no idea what it would be called ) and I know you prob had a lot of effort put in this but work a lil on the story line next short mkay? and don't be a jerk to people just cuz they don't get your suposable COMMON GOLD.

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not bad

the end was crazy. with the transformation. AWSM

WUT?

LOL AWSM BUT DID SHE SHOOT NIPPLES OUT OF HER BOW?

Woah.

Love the sounds, theming, idea in general... Honestly I can see this on the homepage! Nice job

TheJreamz

BIG PROBLEM!

IN 1 OF THE LEVELS EVRYTHING IS BLANK! i cant see anything but my character and the background. theres walls but they arent visible. this pisses me off. other then that good game ish.

um this game is awsm!

but its not that nice that you work so long to get everything then u die.... kinda dumb that way. sorry...

Feels Like...

A Huge Rush, With a burst of surprise every second.. like your running, and everything is trying to stop you, but no matter what, you find some little way past it. you keep on running. you go further. dead end? No, you find a exit still, the end of the world? No! you find a crack in space! you go through a wall... everything you knew was fake. your inside of that crack and it's a blank room, never ending. everythings white, do you stop? No, you keep running.

Keep Running

nice

respect. and keep on working on the music.

TheJreamz

Hey Man

I Can See That You Are Doing Amazing And Superbly Incredible At your Music. P.S. Its Jon, The Paarup Family! Nice Work Man